An Escape
Frustrated from the agony of life….
I slowly closed my eyes but, it’s more like opening the eyes to a place where I am bringing myself, standing in the middle of a pathway bordered by Bermudagrass, very freshly bathed with dew drops which were decorating and shining like pearls on the green. The charming trees with most amazing canopies of orange and red are making the scene more alluring. The temperature is sweetly cold but I can feel the warm embrace of my favorite sun. I can smell the perfume of this environment, the emerging petrichor from the soil, the most pleasing natural scent which always makes me to inhale it greedily. It is so relaxing to me.
On the trees, in their nests, birds are watching me as if a new guest has arrived and they are chirping their best melodies. Air, with its happiest spirit is touching my skin like it wants to feel me. At some distance a big Sakura tree is calling me towards itself like a long lost friend. I ran like a kid towards her and she showered her white and pink flower on me when I looked up towards her and, there is my favorite sun watching me from behind the crown of my Sakura and smiling at me. He is rising higher and showing his power to me that how strong his rays are to burn me but at the same time he is hiding behind the clouds to protect me too.
I sat under the shade of Sakura to read something and nobody even dared to disturb me. They just kept watching me like, if they move or talk to me, I will leave the place and, they will become alone again. But this naughty sun doesn’t want to stop disturbing me as if he wants to play hide and seek with me. Well let him stay alone for the moment.huh!
Far away from a distance I can hear sound of running water, since everyone is quiet I can listen more clear. I stood, and followed the sound to see a beautiful flow of stream, ignoring the eyes of my favorite as he is angry and raising his power again. Now, I am standing near the stream with so many pebbles under my bare feet and stones at the banks. I tried to look at him to see if he is lowering his ego or not. But, he is not….With a sad heart , I sat on a stone where water was calm and steady and, put my feet in cool water that also seems so glad to sense my feet as I am.
So many cute, little and beautiful fishes in their colorful dresses and, with happy lips came to see me. I put my hands in the water to touch them but, they moved away with a fear. Soon they came again and kissed my palms and showed their pleasure. Hey! I can now see reflection of him in the water and look he is trying to touch me after cooling his rays by sending them to me through the water, so that it can’t hurt me much. I looked, he, behind me, in the reflection of us in the water. Now he is happy and smiling again. I also smiled and closed my eyes again to feel him but, he went away when I opened my eyes because it was just a dream……..
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Amazing!!! and Glad to see emerging writers here...!
You are a writer.. you should keep that in mind though you may not write much!
Keep writing.... there are people who would love to read your articles...
Thank you soooo muchh for your help and support ^^ kD..I like to write here.
What a big article jiya o_O
Hey girl,
I promised you that i read your article one day:))) Maybe soon. First of all I am impressed by your english.
I am not sure if reality isn't also a dream - an escape from life. However don't escape from life into dreams. Life is more crazy, unpredictable and surprising than any dreams. Thanks to life you can feel the real power, sometimes pain and fears but also the real moments of happiness, of emotions, of feelings by all your senses. Just take this risk and find dreams in life, not out of it. And the quote for today: “I dream my painting and I paint my dream.” (Vincent van Gogh).
darling... one word for you AWESOME!!! your imagination and creativity are amazing, you have a great talent and I hope that you can take a good advantage of it, becoming in a great writter. People around the world should enjoy your words 🙂 Congratulations my lovely sister
Wow Jiyooo what an article .. All of the beautiful scenarios of nature in one place .. huh ! I wish I get that dream too and hope one day we'll face that in real ! it'll be so calm and peaceful ^_^
Loved it !
Hi Jiya!
Your style is delicate and nice. You made me dream with you. Keep it up and write more topics. By the way, you need to know how to use commas correctly; this will make perfect writings and don't hurry when you write. Try to revise your topic many times before sharing it. Sometimes the writer wants to delete something or edit another. Why the sun is "he" not "she" 😛
Thank you.. Blue/Blackmatta
Thanks blue..I will keep that in mind in next article..:)
Thank you so much guys..for giving your time to read this.. 😀 🙂
WOW!!!!!!! I must say it is an article which is full of vivid descriptions. The topic you have developed is quite original as well. Keep on depicting us what you dream about!!!! Thumbs up!!!!
Thanks Racheyyyy 😀
Something which made me lost and put me back in time..... Thanks ... I hope u will keep dreaming. This is really something we say.... awesome
Thank you sid 😀
Thank you for this sweet article, i can really feel the bitter joy of nature 🙂 keep writing dear...looking forward to read more amazing words from you!!!
thank you Angela 😀 ^^