You compelled me to be there again
Without giving me time to explain
Befriending the same fear and pain
Where my imperfect soul wanted to take the whole blame
I never returned to where I belong to
But I’ll always be there for you
Despite all I knew
It’s hard to see memories flew
I still believe it can’t all be true
And when I listened to the songs of your heartache
Remembering those days and places
Filled with faith, grace and craze
Only tears came
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How could you be such an awesome poet !!
Attractive vocabs you use!
Your poems can be sung as it has the rhythm!
Song of the heart ache!! You mean you were happy when the person gets ache in your poem ?! O.o
I think this poem can be continued even further or may be you end it in a different way! Sorry for this last comment if you don't like.
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Thank you for your comment, your suggestions are most welcome ^^ actually to end with any poems, i find myself struggling , maybe it`s a little confusing but i meant to say that those days were awesome in the past but remembering them in the present are heartbreaking... 🙂
Great! what a poem!!..i like it...the starting two lines just compelled me to read and read..^^...
haha, thank you jiyaaa...im glad you like it :))