Hello!!
Can you HEAR me?
Sometimes I am louder sometimes I whisper!
Sometimes I am sweet sometimes bitter!
Although I am roaming around your ears!
Still I miss you, to listen to me!
I understand you may not hear me! Then,
Can you SEE me?
I am not an amazing scene neither an interesting movie!
You will find me here and there moving!!
Although I am in your eyes I don’t feel my presence!
I miss your eyes, to see me!
Believed, your eyes may be closed for a while, but
Can you FEEL me?
I am in your heart I am in your thoughts!!
Sometimes I am naughty sometimes Romantic!
Sometimes smart sometimes I am Lunatic!
Although I am there inside you I feel like orphan!
I miss your care, to feel me!
Assumed, you might have stone heart or careless about feelings, at least
Can you PAY me ATTENTION?
Take me like a boring study book or your favorite novel!
A funny drama or fairy tale!!
Although you have studied all your life!
I miss you, to concentrate on me!
Don’t avoid, at least, WRITE!
Can you WRITE me down?
I am your love letter and your love notes!
I may be your top secret and caged in your personal pad!
Although I am in your fingers I miss
You, to hold me again!
Like many, you might be busy, Okay! So
Can you TOUCH me?
Don’t worry I won’t bother much
I myself come through your heart and will touch your lips!
I may be your melodious song or your any talk!
Although I touch your lips daily!
I feel untouched & miss you, to kiss me!
Can You??
Hello!!
Can you??
Got it! You may not do anything, still may be, you do!!
I am there always even if you are gone!
I stay everywhere and forever but I am not God!
Although I am everywhere! But
I miss you, to SEARCH ME OUT!
Did you guess who I am? I am sure you, NOT!
If yes! I am very sure you are WRONG!
I am WORD!
NOW!!
Can you HEAR me, please?
Can you SEE me, please?
Can you FEEL me, please?
Can you CONCENTRATE on me please?
Can you TOUCH meh, please?
Can you KISS me, please?
Can you??
H E L L O!!
I am not stranger I am your word!
Can you KEEP me, please?
oh.....fabulous..!!!!!great....nice thought..!!:))
Wow!! O.O
Speechless 😀
Cyclone O.o that was ... wonderful poem! Reaaaallyyy impressed 🙂
Cyclone!
Finally, I read your poem.. long, deep but simple and wonderful.
It seems like a riddle, I like this way 🙂
It can be nicer if you read it again and think of some lines. Edit it/improve it. I'm sure you will get a wonderful result!
Bravoooo!
Thanks guys!
And blue I am blessed you appreciated it and suggested to improve it! I will surely try to improve ! 🙂
Woah, thats impressive, and still you are saying you are not good poet ? 😛 lieeee xD love it .. so creaativee and meaningful .. 🙂
Thanks !
nice nice cycoo^^
Edited somewhat! I guess it is little improved . ^^
Nice one, CYC I like the part Can you HEAR me, please?
Can you SEE me, please?
Can you FEEL me, please?
Can you CONCENTRATE on me please?
Can you TOUCH me, please?
but the best part is Can you KISS me, please?
Can you??..... if I could I would kiss someone here xD
Hey Cyc.... !
It's really nice... I love ur poem...
Thanks a lot Reshma 😉
Cyc.....It was a wonderful poem.
I loved it!!
No words :p 🙂
ahahah woww..It is just fantastic....like you are 😛
Thanks a lot 🙂
WOW....it is so amazing ♡ .. what a mysterious poem!!
Thank you Gabbie !
Every word goes directly to heart and brain. Although whole poem is awesome but some verses are soo much eye catching. Like the "orphan" line . the sequence u opted to write makes it more natural .
I am happy you found it worth reading (-:
Thank you very much 🙂
Great job..done by uh fire brigede..really amazingg