The way you were staring at me
Like a bee does to flowers,
The way you were laughing at me
Like a child laughs at any mistake,
The way you were mesmerizing me
Like the nature makes you awake,
The way you were ignoring me
Like it rains even if there’s flood,
The way you were smiling at me
Like the flower does seeing the drops,
The way you were whispering to me
Like the birds do in enjoyment,
And suddenly I got to know
It was all because I did first,
Like I was wishing you to see
The way to you I used to see..!!!!
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Sid, one correction here (Like WHEN a child laughs AT any mistake)
maybe it is better like this, agree?
And I don't get the last line. Can you change it, please?
Thank you
Lolz...It's so old ..i guess the time when i had started to write ...so, obviously there would be much mistakes....hehehe....even i was wondering have i written it?
What to say Sid_Fire_King? It looks like a melancholic piece of poetry.In my opinion, some verses are a bit sad . Anyways, thumbs up!!!!! You have made a good choice of words , as usual!!!! Fir milenge ...