What’s the difference?
between you and me..
between you and you…
and between we and you?
You have a soul …
I have a soul
We live in the same planet
We plant the same earth
The same sun brightens our life
And the same moon lightens our sky
You have a goal …
I have my goal
Planting a bush is better than shooting
Smiling to your brothers is better than weeping
Building a new school is better than destroying
Saving a life is better than killing
You sleep and dream …
I sleep and I daydream
We are all humans
We love to live
To live in peace
And rest in peace
Still thinking of the difference?
Tell me … where’s the difference?!!
Blackmatta/Blue
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Awesome!!!
You almost depict my thoughts .. thanks 🙂
really appreciable!
and solid meaning... people must know and think about it...
Thank you for your encouraging words~
Wow While reading I was just in that - I don't read much poems but u know when I started reading I can't stop myself U always express it on the point - Splendid 🙂
Thank you, Jack. Try to read more poems, I'm sure that you'll like peotry and maybe you might write your own poems!
Its a very very nice poem giving a good message to me..loved it! 🙂
Thank yo, Jiya
Hi there Blue. There are just one thing to comment on this piece of writing...
What a good topic you have developed!!! It is well chosen, concise and accurate. Definitely, thumbs up!!!!!!!!
Thank you, Rachel. I have to thank Fuhrer because he suggested the topic "peace/world peace". I'm happy to read your comment 🙂
Grammar mistake. There is just one thing to say is the correct sentence...
good message,simple words, deep topic and sincere meaning at the same time ,
Thank you for this kind reply.