To feel you are coming close to me is enough
So as to hold you in my arms for a few instance
I would gift you each beat of my heart
In order to perceive this way of love
I would let myself free
Inch by inch
Just for you
without any restrictions
To feel you mine, to feel myself yours
I would create a never-ending tale
So as to have a moment that meets us together
for ever and ever
In order to caress the center of your heart
So as to baby you in body and soul
Just for a few seconds
I would like to guess your thoughts
I would like to make you laugh
I would do anything for you
so that you could feel
you are the most important part of me
What I wouldn’t try, my dear love
So as to be with you
Just for a few seconds…
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Superb Rach..... (y)
Please review and update I think line 10th from bottom is missing some words.
baby is a verb here, but I'm not sure if we can say (in body and soul)
A poem which is full of love and honest feelings.
Nice~~
Ok Cyc. I will take a look at the original version . Blue, you are right. Really, I don´t know if we can say that phrase or not . Guess it is not allowed in academic or formal writing . It is a romantic expression I´ve created for this special poetry . Thanks a lot for your commentaries guys...